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		<title>By: Andavri</title>
		<link>http://boysofsummer.blackbirdslullaby.com/when-it-is-quiet-and-still/#comment-71</link>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 11 Oct 2013 00:21:44 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Don&#039;t beat yourself up, Van. I know how that goes. I do trend toward the old &quot;You will fall in love and marry and grow old and die with the guy/girl who gave you your first kiss/handjob.&quot; saw myself. Which does make it difficult when you come up against I want to do this which normally indicates a red flag but that&#039;s not quite where I&#039;m going with it, exactly. 

This is particular arc, not to drop spoilers, is &lt;em&gt;COMPLICATED&lt;/em&gt;. It was complicated in the story this is all based off and the added complications of changing time, place, and narrator (I wrote the original Boys of Summer in third person limited, with the narrator locked on Darin.) as well as the addition of the visual medium has certainly not made it any &lt;em&gt;less&lt;/em&gt; complicated. This particular scene played out a lot differently in the story when Darin was just a po&#039; boy (from a po&#039; family *starts singing Bohemian Rhapsody off key*) and Josh was just some rich boy that Darin went to a prissy school with. Now Josh is a nobleman and Darin isn&#039;t. And then you swap the direction of narration to Josh not Darin...

Long story short(er) I had troubles with this update and worries about it and you going Topeka! sorta made me ACK! because I wasn&#039;t driving straight for that ship. (Although Josh and Darin are sorta cute together, and as Morgaine has pointed out, two hot guys together can make people&#039;s ship flag go up anyway, then you follow that with a scene with them kissing and, really, who wouldn&#039;t go Eureka!) 

But don&#039;t worry, I am pretty bad at red herrings, usually (other than knowing that Freddy Jones should never accuse him of being the bad guy.) and avoid them when they&#039;re not so important, so most of the time if you see hints, you&#039;re welcome to raise all the ship flags you wish to. (eg. yes, Sev has a crush on Marianne and we will probably see more of that pairing as time goes by.) 

This was just a weird, weird, weird update. Sorry about that. And hey, it does mean you&#039;re thinking about the story and that&#039;s good. It&#039;s not all mindless fluffy tooth and brain rotting candy floss.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Don&#8217;t beat yourself up, Van. I know how that goes. I do trend toward the old &#8220;You will fall in love and marry and grow old and die with the guy/girl who gave you your first kiss/handjob.&#8221; saw myself. Which does make it difficult when you come up against I want to do this which normally indicates a red flag but that&#8217;s not quite where I&#8217;m going with it, exactly. </p>
<p>This is particular arc, not to drop spoilers, is <em>COMPLICATED</em>. It was complicated in the story this is all based off and the added complications of changing time, place, and narrator (I wrote the original Boys of Summer in third person limited, with the narrator locked on Darin.) as well as the addition of the visual medium has certainly not made it any <em>less</em> complicated. This particular scene played out a lot differently in the story when Darin was just a po&#8217; boy (from a po&#8217; family *starts singing Bohemian Rhapsody off key*) and Josh was just some rich boy that Darin went to a prissy school with. Now Josh is a nobleman and Darin isn&#8217;t. And then you swap the direction of narration to Josh not Darin&#8230;</p>
<p>Long story short(er) I had troubles with this update and worries about it and you going Topeka! sorta made me ACK! because I wasn&#8217;t driving straight for that ship. (Although Josh and Darin are sorta cute together, and as Morgaine has pointed out, two hot guys together can make people&#8217;s ship flag go up anyway, then you follow that with a scene with them kissing and, really, who wouldn&#8217;t go Eureka!) </p>
<p>But don&#8217;t worry, I am pretty bad at red herrings, usually (other than knowing that Freddy Jones should never accuse him of being the bad guy.) and avoid them when they&#8217;re not so important, so most of the time if you see hints, you&#8217;re welcome to raise all the ship flags you wish to. (eg. yes, Sev has a crush on Marianne and we will probably see more of that pairing as time goes by.) </p>
<p>This was just a weird, weird, weird update. Sorry about that. And hey, it does mean you&#8217;re thinking about the story and that&#8217;s good. It&#8217;s not all mindless fluffy tooth and brain rotting candy floss.</p>
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		<title>By: Van</title>
		<link>http://boysofsummer.blackbirdslullaby.com/when-it-is-quiet-and-still/#comment-70</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Van]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 10 Oct 2013 23:54:50 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Ack, no, it&#039;s probably my own bad writing habits polluting my reader brain again. I&#039;m not very good at writing romantic relationships, and I&#039;m particularly bad at writing relationships that are heading for a break-up (or not about to get off the runway, ever), so I generally stay away from romantic false leads, which is really bad because pretty much all of my characters end up with the first other character who makes eyes at them, unless they had some romantic relationships prior to the start. So when I see romantic interactions between other people&#039;s characters, I just kind of assume that something&#039;s going to happen, even though I am very aware that life doesn&#039;t work like that and fiction doesn&#039;t have to either.

So sorry about that! :S]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Ack, no, it&#8217;s probably my own bad writing habits polluting my reader brain again. I&#8217;m not very good at writing romantic relationships, and I&#8217;m particularly bad at writing relationships that are heading for a break-up (or not about to get off the runway, ever), so I generally stay away from romantic false leads, which is really bad because pretty much all of my characters end up with the first other character who makes eyes at them, unless they had some romantic relationships prior to the start. So when I see romantic interactions between other people&#8217;s characters, I just kind of assume that something&#8217;s going to happen, even though I am very aware that life doesn&#8217;t work like that and fiction doesn&#8217;t have to either.</p>
<p>So sorry about that! :S</p>
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		<title>By: Andavri</title>
		<link>http://boysofsummer.blackbirdslullaby.com/when-it-is-quiet-and-still/#comment-69</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Andavri]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 10 Oct 2013 23:29:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I must be doing something wrong... :-/ Because Darin isn&#039;t supposed to have been giving off any Josh-liking vibes. He &lt;em&gt;doesn&#039;t&lt;/em&gt; like Josh, not that way nor much at all. It should have played out for him more or less like it did, if it had been &lt;em&gt;absolutely anyone&lt;/em&gt; from Johnny Osmont to St. Agnes that he was helping in the last post... 

And while, yes, Josh does kiss him here, I&#039;m not sure that Josh really likes him or has chemistry with Darin either. It was more in response to latching onto the feeling of security that Darin is giving him. Which I think even Josh, when he&#039;s thinking straight, will understand is a bad basis for a romantic relationship. 

Their relationship will develop into something else besides bully and bullied post this happening, but we are a long way off of Josh heart Darin. 

So if I&#039;m giving off slash-heavy vibes here... I&#039;m playing this out wrong... *sigh*

As for the old Orkney Keep burning down, I&#039;m not sure, I asked Morgaine if she minded if I said that it did burn down (for reasons) and she loved the idea. (I think that lot drives her nuts sometimes.) But whether it happens in current canon or post I don&#039;t know cause I&#039;m not sure if she knows yet. I guess we&#039;ll both see. 

And yeah, I liked giving Loki/Mordred a very boring subject to teach. Especially to a bunch of three quarters asleep teenage boys who just rolled out of bed. 

Thanks, Van! *goes back to wondering where she went wrong*]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I must be doing something wrong&#8230; :-/ Because Darin isn&#8217;t supposed to have been giving off any Josh-liking vibes. He <em>doesn&#8217;t</em> like Josh, not that way nor much at all. It should have played out for him more or less like it did, if it had been <em>absolutely anyone</em> from Johnny Osmont to St. Agnes that he was helping in the last post&#8230; </p>
<p>And while, yes, Josh does kiss him here, I&#8217;m not sure that Josh really likes him or has chemistry with Darin either. It was more in response to latching onto the feeling of security that Darin is giving him. Which I think even Josh, when he&#8217;s thinking straight, will understand is a bad basis for a romantic relationship. </p>
<p>Their relationship will develop into something else besides bully and bullied post this happening, but we are a long way off of Josh heart Darin. </p>
<p>So if I&#8217;m giving off slash-heavy vibes here&#8230; I&#8217;m playing this out wrong&#8230; *sigh*</p>
<p>As for the old Orkney Keep burning down, I&#8217;m not sure, I asked Morgaine if she minded if I said that it did burn down (for reasons) and she loved the idea. (I think that lot drives her nuts sometimes.) But whether it happens in current canon or post I don&#8217;t know cause I&#8217;m not sure if she knows yet. I guess we&#8217;ll both see. </p>
<p>And yeah, I liked giving Loki/Mordred a very boring subject to teach. Especially to a bunch of three quarters asleep teenage boys who just rolled out of bed. </p>
<p>Thanks, Van! *goes back to wondering where she went wrong*</p>
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		<title>By: Van</title>
		<link>http://boysofsummer.blackbirdslullaby.com/when-it-is-quiet-and-still/#comment-68</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Van]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 10 Oct 2013 05:32:51 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[&lt;i&gt;Why is it the more important a scene is the harder it is to finish and the more like drivel it seems to become?&lt;/i&gt;

If I had a nickel for every time I&#039;d found that! But this didn&#039;t read like drivel at all. :)

So I wasn&#039;t crazy when I detected that hint of chemistry in the last post! Curious as to where Darin and Josh go from there.

Elizabet is awesome, and she would make a fantastic witch if she did happen to get the lucky genes. Good of her, covering for her brother, especially since she always seems to know exactly what&#039;s going on. And for all Josh may not always be the nicest, and is tied up in some shady stuff, he seems like he lucked out in regards to dodging the worst of his father&#039;s genes as well, at least what I can gather from not having met his father yet.

The old Orkney Keep burned down? Interesting. Is this foreshadowing for upcoming Albion events, given what&#039;s up with the current lord there, or is this a more recent(ish) development?

Also, small thing, but it pleases me that Mordred&#039;s new incarnation teaches a boring subject. &quot;Damn it, heed me, students! Revere me! Acknowledge me as the center of the universe, the only man whose opinions matter!&quot; &quot;...zzzzzz....&quot; :)]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><i>Why is it the more important a scene is the harder it is to finish and the more like drivel it seems to become?</i></p>
<p>If I had a nickel for every time I&#8217;d found that! But this didn&#8217;t read like drivel at all. <img src="http://boysofsummer.blackbirdslullaby.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif" alt=":)" class="wp-smiley" /></p>
<p>So I wasn&#8217;t crazy when I detected that hint of chemistry in the last post! Curious as to where Darin and Josh go from there.</p>
<p>Elizabet is awesome, and she would make a fantastic witch if she did happen to get the lucky genes. Good of her, covering for her brother, especially since she always seems to know exactly what&#8217;s going on. And for all Josh may not always be the nicest, and is tied up in some shady stuff, he seems like he lucked out in regards to dodging the worst of his father&#8217;s genes as well, at least what I can gather from not having met his father yet.</p>
<p>The old Orkney Keep burned down? Interesting. Is this foreshadowing for upcoming Albion events, given what&#8217;s up with the current lord there, or is this a more recent(ish) development?</p>
<p>Also, small thing, but it pleases me that Mordred&#8217;s new incarnation teaches a boring subject. &#8220;Damn it, heed me, students! Revere me! Acknowledge me as the center of the universe, the only man whose opinions matter!&#8221; &#8220;&#8230;zzzzzz&#8230;.&#8221; <img src="http://boysofsummer.blackbirdslullaby.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif" alt=":)" class="wp-smiley" /></p>
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		<title>By: Andavri</title>
		<link>http://boysofsummer.blackbirdslullaby.com/when-it-is-quiet-and-still/#comment-67</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Andavri]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 10 Oct 2013 04:46:40 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Why is it the more important a scene is the harder it is to finish and the more like drivel it seems to become? But seriously, if all of my other career ideas fall through, I still probably have a career in writing romance novels. &gt;_&lt;&#039; Candy floss for everybody!]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Why is it the more important a scene is the harder it is to finish and the more like drivel it seems to become? But seriously, if all of my other career ideas fall through, I still probably have a career in writing romance novels. >_<&#8217; Candy floss for everybody!
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